Droppy Comic

Ethan

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I need feedback:

1. Do you understand what's going on in the comic?
2. How does it look?


Murad

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From what i understand, the green creature uses a wand and zaps the other creature to some foreign planet? The design is unique, maybe over simplified? Thats my own personal taste so you don't need to change anything unless it bothers you.

« Last Edit: November 01, 2011, 12:29:01 pm by mozzy »

Darkhog

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1. No, but some text bubbles would clear it up
2. It look great, for first panel, is that 3d or some clever vector?

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Alexin

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I agree with Mozzy. It's easy to understand what's going on and the graphics are simple but effective, in my opinion.
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alex pang

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I don't have any idea whats going on, yet the graphics are simple and cute :)

Ethan

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Yup that is in fact what's going on- the green dude zaps Droppy and sends him to a deserted planet.

Thanks for the nice compliments!

Murad

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One thing I would suggest changing the perspective of the first image just a tad because after looking at it again the wand looks like an extension of the purple creature and the green one is grabbing it.

Ethan

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One thing I would suggest changing the perspective of the first image just a tad because after looking at it again the wand looks like an extension of the purple creature and the green one is grabbing it.
Interesting. As I a very much like the perspective I have here, I'm going to wait and see if anyone else has had this thought.

Miasmos Games

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I was actually about to suggest that exact same thing, it looks quite unclear what's happening in that first panel, like Mozzy said. However I do still very much like it, it looks simple but suits it well :)

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rob1221

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Changing the color and shape of the thing the green guy is holding should make it stand out more instead of looking like part of Droppy.

Ethan

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OK, I'll change it from a septor to a wand tomorrow- should be unambiguous.

Here's another comic:

« Last Edit: November 02, 2011, 12:14:21 am by Ethan »

Miasmos Games

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I'm seeing a surprising lack of a comic...?

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Ethan

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Haha, well, point taken I guess

Miasmos Games

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Lol but what happened to the image?

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Ethan

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Oooooooooh I thought you meant the comic was bad. You meant that you literally couldn't see the image?