How can I improve this?

Noroup

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This pops up when you die

What do you guys think? How can I improve this?

http://imgur.com/a/Ci6qF

KramerGames

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I would stick to one font and give the bluebox some kind of frame. Fair warning:I'm not very experienced in design/UI.
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JeffreyDriver

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As Kramer said, try and stick to one font. You can have variations of a font, but try and use just one.

For an experiment, pick one font, but play around with using one method of making the same font look different.  For example using capitals for headings and lowercase for everything else.

Also look at aligning everything.

« Last Edit: June 03, 2017, 02:58:16 pm by JeffreyDriver »
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TheIndieStation

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Outline the menu and retry button instead of having a box in a box.
Allign the menu button with the left side of the highscore tex
Allign the retry button to the righr, but with the same distance that is on the left of the menu button
Shrink the retry image to the same hieght as the menu text on the menu button.

Noroup

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Thanks for all the suggestions! Anything more on color scheme and such?

TheIndieStation

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Colors are fine imo =)