Anybody here with good English?

Shayaan

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 ;) Peace

I wanted to ask you guys if anyone here is good at English. I have written an intro paragraph for my game, 3-4 lines, and it doesn't look nice. And I have around 10 dialogues (short game).

My English is not too good, can anyone write this for me? I have the material. If you want I can send the dialogues (with errors) to you and you can correct those and make it look nicer.

I can't pay you with money but I can help you guys in other ways.

[The screenshot of my game is attached]
8) Peace.

JeffreyDriver

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I'll be happy to have a look.
Current Projects:
Retro Redux Compilation (NEW).
Retro Redux (untitled) (NEW).
I always appreciate useful feedback. Thank you.
www.jeffreydriver.co.uk

Shayaan

  • Posts: 88
Appreciate that :)
Should I DM you the intro paragraph for you to take a look?
btw dude I don't think I can pay you for this, but I can help you in some other way.

JeffreyDriver

  • Posts: 1724
No worries. Send it over.
Current Projects:
Retro Redux Compilation (NEW).
Retro Redux (untitled) (NEW).
I always appreciate useful feedback. Thank you.
www.jeffreydriver.co.uk