The Smallest Story - available on Android

Ephoria

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Hello all !

I will talk to you today about my new creation "The Smallest Story". This is a mini game in which you will have to perform several different and varied things. I estimate its lifespan at 20 minutes. It's hard to explain the idea and style of the game. I'll just let you try and find out for yourself.



The game may seem strange to you at first but do not worry because all this is normal.

Good game  :)



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JeffreyDriver

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I played it, and although I did enjoy it, I didn't understand it! Have I missed the meaning?

There's a couple of spelling mistakes "Your" instead of "You're"

The simple graphics work well but I thought that the maze part needed a little bit of extra detail. Maybe if you just slightly rounded the corners or something?

I could really see this being developed into something bigger with a proper story.

Good job!
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Ephoria

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Thanks for your report  :)

It is possible that some spelling mistakes are present, my level of English is not realy good ^^

The story doesn't really make sense in itself.
But I'm thinking of doing a more elaborate sequel that would make sense of it all.

I take note for the maze !


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JeffreyDriver

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Well, your English is better than my French.

These are the mistakes I spotted towards the end:

"You're doing great!"

"You're right. The......."

I'd like to add that I enjoyed having to figure out what to do without instruction, though the 'rate' puzzle had me stumped for a while. Everything was pretty logical though.
Current Projects:
Retro Redux Compilation (NEW).
Retro Redux (untitled) (NEW).
I always appreciate useful feedback. Thank you.
www.jeffreydriver.co.uk

Ephoria

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Thanks ! I change that  :)



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decafpanda

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It's an interesting game.  I enjoyed my brief time with it.  I'll pick it back up a little later and finish it.

Rated and reviewed!

Ephoria

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Thanks ! Thumbs up


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bobbyck

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Even though this was a bit on the short side, I did enjoy this quite a bit.