I decided to write some biographs, just for fun, and if they are good i will put them in this game, A Cloak From The Past.
These are just biographs about the four playable characthers in the game. But i would like to hear your feedback and so.
Personalities And Biographs:
Timmy The Kid:
Biography: Not much is known about Timmy, although he makes a good explorer and adventurer he is just a kid and does not really think and wonder that much, his parents are unknown, although he lives with his "grandpa", and grandpa is lost. And thats why he is out looking for him. But he should have armored himself more than a bucket and a cloak, i mean the sword is okay but... oh? I forgot to tell you he found a magical cloak? Well thats what the game is about.
Weaknesses: He is afraid of the darkness and cannot enter dark places without some kind of light.
Timmy is bullied by other kids for his imagination, but he does not really care about it, timmy is also very bad at ranged combat since he can only throw bombs and paralyze enemies with nuts or stones he finds around trees.
The last and the strongest weakness is that he has no more than 25 Hp points (since he doesnt have any "real armor"
Strengths: His sword was given to him as a birthday gift from the Town Wizard, the sword has a magical enchantment of "unbreakable", since he doesnt have to change his sword, it makes a lot more space in his backpack and belt, where he instead puts nuts and rocks, and some Hp Pots, his bucket on the head gives nothing in plus since its not enchanted, but makes him overall more cute, and that has benefits in gameplay, believe me or not. He is also immune to all poisions and diseases caused by food and various attacks, that is very useful since the other characthers can be diseased, but not cured.
The last and best thing is that he is short, and can manage to get across tight spaces and risky bridges, as Ernie, you can of curse fly, but not crouch or land.
The Birdie Ernie:
Biography: Birdie Ernie, or just Ernie. Is Timmys best friend and pet, when Ernie was a little kid trying to learn to fly he fell into a hot, and i mean burning hot brew, only seconds after his mother flew and catched him, and some days after the incident Ernie started to get a bit darker, "burned" feathers, and when he opened his mouth he accidently spited fire and killed his mother, since he was just a baby he didnt really care, turns out it was some fire brew, man, what do i know? and from that day he just knew he was something special, and Timmy taught so when finded Ernie too, he burned down Grandpas house a few times, but i mean... Thats why Timmy loves him, rigth? And besides breathing fire and spiting lava, he can fly fast and carry lots of stuffs in his backpack.
Weaknesses: Breathing fire is good for combat, but sometimes people will not be so nice to him, mainly because they think that he will destroy their house or kill them by accident and the ability to not crawl or land, is a big minus. He is also alot more likely to be poisoned or diseased.
The last and strongest weakness is that he cant talk, because birds dont talk, they spit fire, but dont talk, simple as that.
Strengths: He is very good in combat and does a lot of damage, espiecally the overall stacking damage. He can carry lots of stuff in his backpack, he is very fast and has a total of 45 Hp, he can also activate switches beetween gaps and levers at walls, overall he is very fast and good at combat
The last and best thing is that he is the only characther that can fly. Since he is a bird. What did you think? Birds fly man, accept it.
Reinard The Wanderer:
Biography: Reinard is a tall, and clumsy wanderer, he is on a trip on a request from the Lord of Bitroftia across all regions to write the longest and best book in the world, called An Adventurers Life 101. He is convinced that this is the only thing that he is good at, but Timmy and Ernie knows he makes a pretty god bowman.
Weaknesses: Although he is a good guy he can sometimes be a little ruff and angry in conversations, such things can lead to hostile villagers and guards, he is not so good with swords and overall close combat and he does not have any room in his backpack, mainly because he has his damn book in it.
His strongest weakness is that he is very clumsy and can be a little slower than the other guys to attack, and he cant climb stairs and ladders, he needs to be carried or thrown over a ledge/gap to come across.
Strengths: he is very talented with the bow during many many years of training, he is a little slow, but steady. He has a Hp value of 50, he is very tall and that has benefits, such as reaching apples on a tree and activating levers on a cliff.
The last and best thing is that he is a master at stealing stuff, which he isnt very proud of...
Mc Ruff The Strong:
Biography: Mc Ruff was born in another region of Bitroftia, where babies where thaugth to figth instead of speak, and where haircuts didnt exist, under an attack his parents died in front of his blue eyes, and later that day he was taken away by an old woman, and he grew up eating cake, lots of cake, thats why he is fat, as a life rule number one he has choosen to help anybody who needs him, but he refuses to use a weapon, and only fights bare-handed, he is a very nice person but the voice does not really go trough his beard, oh, i forgot to mention that he has the sexiest beard in Bitroftia. The girls are like: oh, here he comes

yippie, you know, that feel? You dont? Oh well. I see
Weaknesses: he is very slow since he is fat, but strong. He can speak but only like: Me, Want, That... Since he wasnt teached to talk, and the voice cant really go trough his beard...
The last and strongest weakness is that he is unable to steal, since his moral is to not steal or harm a villager/wanderer.
Strengths: he is the strongest and "machoest" characther in the game, since he has 80 Hp points and does a lot of damage, some enemies migth even die after one punch! Do i have to say more? He is BADASS!!
The last and best thing is that he can but slam some of the stones and metal sometimes crossed in Bitroftia... and yes... It will break. This is considered to be overpowered, but he is macho