Your building isn't bad technically, it's just a boring design. If it wasn't called "video game shop", no one would know what it's supposed to be. Right now it looks like an elevator vestibule in a parking garage.
Google image search is your friend. If you google "retail store exterior" you'll see some interesting shapes, colours, and logos. A viewer should be able to look at the sprite and immediately know it's a store of some sort; ideally, specifically a video game store. Try to make use of archetypal videogame imagery in branding the building: a SNES-like controller shape for the sign, maybe pixel art painted onto the exterior brick walls.
Find some reference, crack open your sketchbook, draw several pages of thumbnails just to explore ideas. Once you have one you like, hit the computer and take another shot at it.
Good luck!